It's more of an recount of what I had went through my graduation day. I wrote it into an essay as a practice for myself as well as to record for the memorable event. I hope to get critiques and hope experts here could help me to edit my essay if there are any structuring awkwardness in my sentences and other mistakes.
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The thousands of applauses from the students rocked the hall when the guest o honor entered. Everyone was so excited about who the guest was. After the hymn, the host invited the principal to give the graduating pupils her speech and the guest after her. Although the first speech was quite dry, the second was pretty interesting.
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